Web Sales Content

I am looking for a motivating content for my online business. Just two pages I need some one who can write a sales page which is more realistic to the reader.. motivating.. transparent content I already have one page written, which has to be edited and needs corrections and a new 2nd page to be created to use for follow-up once some one pre-enrols for the opportunity To read my content which needs editing, re-writing or corrections go to [login to view URL] I have removed my email address from the website content as per the freelancer.com conditions. Further details about 2nd page will be given once we start the first page