barber shop advert 2

i need a barber shop advert redone. I have uploaded the photos along with the old advert. the old advert looks okay and has what we want in regards to showing the discount card and having the right words but it just does not look that good. I need the advert to be in this size length 240mm x 100mm with a 5mm bleed and in a pdf folder. i want to use the same words and things as the old advert but i want new pictures and a better layout. Also with the 1/2 price card in the old advert i want all the boxes to say $24 until you get the to 1/2 price box and then you put in $12