Business Plan review and advice

Completed Posted Sep 3, 2012 Paid on delivery
Completed Paid on delivery

Hi,

Simple project here... Need some advice and some proofreading.

I've written my first business plan in accordance with all the research i could do on the internet with respect to what it should look like and what sections it should have.

I'm at about 35 pages now and i need someone who has deep experience with writing business plans, reviewing, proof reading, etc.. to look at it and tell me what needs to be corrected from a grammar point of view, as well as a business point of view.

My partner and I are ready to put this in front of some investors... but we want to know that everything that an investor is looking for is in the document and that it reads well.

I'll have to have you sign our non-disclosure agreement before we start... hopefully that's ok. Cant expose my whole entire business plan to someone without that.

The business... in short.. in case this matters to you, is all about sexual connotation, the subliminal desire of human beings for anything sexual, sexy women and men, models, sexy hot body competitions, and even a little porn on the side. It's a very interesting business.

Thanks

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Project ID: #2456623

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11 proposals Remote project Active Sep 4, 2012

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gregorybair

Greetings! I have created over 215 business plans, financial and marketing reports and Private Placement Memorandums in the past 10 years and additionally have raised debt and equity totaling $220 million to fund thes More

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javed1705

dear sir please check pm

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AnnaWinn

Business analyst and entrapeneur

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onlyshakil

I am PhD in Business Management and a professional academic writer as well. I am an expert in proof reading

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PlanWriter

That does sound like an interesting business! We can read, review, edit and correct where necessary and deliver it to you in 2 working days. Any questions please don't hesitate to ask.

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vishrut1303

Hi I can work on this project. For details check your PM Inbox

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keyed

Hi there, I'm an UK/Aussie living in Thailand and I'm sure I can help you out with this. Please see my PM to you.

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saurabhagarwal83

hopefully you will get the result what you want bygiving the project to me.

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Cnepdivad

I would love the opportunity to review your business plan and offer advice to you regarding the plan. I have written quite a few and have 20 years business and accounting experience. Seems like a very interesting bus More

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