Rewritten article

  • Status: Pending
  • Prize: $60
  • Entries Received: 43
  • Winner: wardahk98

Contest Brief

One page business mission statement we need rewritten professionally and correctly.

Business appliancegenie.ca

WE LIVE OUR CODE OF VALUES BY…
RESPECT:

Treating others as we would like to be treated.
Listening with the intent to understand what is being said and acknowledging that what is said is important to the speaker.
Responding in a timely fashion.
Speaking calmly and respectfully, without profanity or sarcasm.
Acknowledging everyone as right from their own perspective.
INTEGRITY:

Making only agreements we are willing, able and intend to keep.
Communicating any potentially broken agreements at the first appropriate opportunity to all parties concerned.
Looking to the system for correction and proposing all possible solutions if something is not working.
Operating in a responsible manner: "Above the line…"
Communicating honestly and with purpose.
Asking clarifying questions if we disagree or do not understand.
Never saying anything about anyone that we would not say to him or her.
CUSTOMER FOCUS:

Continuously striving to maximize internal and external customer loyalty.
Making our best effort to understand and appreciate the customers' needs in every situation.
Having Fun in the Process!

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  • karugathuo
    karugathuo
    • 4 years ago

    The contest holder looks like a prejudiced person. Someone re-writes my article and gets high rates. From nowhere my ratings fall from 4 stars to 2 stars. I feel robbed of my intellectual property, but all the best to the guy that wins.

    • 4 years ago
  • Stephanie Higgins
    Stephanie Higgins
    • 4 years ago

    Please rate #43. Thank you

    • 4 years ago
  • Rajonislam911
    Rajonislam911
    • 4 years ago

    Sir please check my entry #29 #30 #31 #46 #47 #48

    • 4 years ago
  • Stephanie Higgins
    Stephanie Higgins
    • 4 years ago

    Contest Holder. Please can you rate the entries. Thank you.

    • 4 years ago
  • joshuasafari89
    joshuasafari89
    • 4 years ago

    check entry #32

    • 4 years ago
  • tkhan0
    tkhan0
    • 4 years ago

    Completed and written in clear english. Please check entry #26 . I have updated the statement to be more client friendly. If any minor updates are needed I am always available. Best of luck to you.

    • 4 years ago
  • seharwaheed1997
    seharwaheed1997
    • 4 years ago

    Hello Respected Employer
    I have changed the tense of mission statement to neutral future because mission is something that is oriented towards the upcoming time. Moreover all the fragments are corrected to grammatically correct sentences with respect to PUNCTUATION and CAPITALIZATION. Minor change in the title makes it more attractive and professional.
    I hope you like my work. Looking forward to a positive response.

    • 4 years ago
  • theodorejemming
    theodorejemming
    • 4 years ago

    #done. Definitely cleaned it up more than other authors, and I feel like it sounds great! Check out my draft and let me know how you're feeling about it.

    • 4 years ago
  • Estadler
    Estadler
    • 4 years ago

    Are you looking to have this in bullet point form or do you want it as a write up with paragraphs?

    • 4 years ago
  • Tahidchy
    Tahidchy
    • 4 years ago

    Starting.....

    • 4 years ago

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