Hi Haley,
After reading your post, I am thoroughly convinced that you CAN write and in a very interesting way. Otherwise, I would not have given your post the time of day. I cannot afford to write your book for such a small budget, I am so sorry. However, I would love to offer advice and expertise for the following thirty days. I feel that your biggest issue is a lack of confidence in your abilities. And I promise you that after reading your post, unless someone helped you write it, your English is fine. Writers are not expected to be perfect in grammar and punctuation, just better than most people and you are already better than most. As a professional, I am asked to rewrite and clean up poor quality writing on a daily basis, so I know. Editors and proofreaders are the ones who have to be perfect and even then you can still find some small mistakes in printed work. Now, thank you so much for restoring my faith in your generation. I was practically convinced that a teenager in today's world couldn't string that many words together without resorting to text speech and then I met you. As a writer, you have made my day! Because I really want to help you, I am prepared to give you advice on flow and style. I am also willing to read and discuss what you write, to offer suggestions on word choice and to make sure that your work is easily understood. If you would like my help, please feel free to contact me so that we can discuss details. Have a wonderful day, Haley.
Christa