I believe that I can provide the best attention to detail and excellent presentation for the story. I have proof read the first chapter. I'm pasting the same below (as much as word limit provides).
A new family in the town
Just like any other day, there was a tinkle of silver cutlery in the Wimberley’s house, at about the same time as their meal. It was audible even to a passer-by, but no one had any clue about this tinkle’s mystery, which sounded at the same time every day in the Wimberley’s house.
In reality, inside the house, the cutlery was dancing to the beats of magic cast by Gerbillus Wimberley. Gerbillus Wimberley, a fat, heavily-built, strong headed personality, was gifted with immense muscle power. He worked under the heat of the sun in the maize corn field. He lived on the South Street in Kentucky house No-216-C 8 along with four other members of his family. All of them had come from a different dimension of the world.
As the wizard magic show was being presented by Gerbillus Wimberley, another family member of ‘Wimberley House’; Oris Wimberley, a pale, slim, clean-shaven man, settled himself comfortably on the couch...
“Tap -tap...”. The clattering of shoes was getting louder; someone was coming down the stairs quickly. The tapping stopped suddenly, and the owner walked towards the two Wimberleys; Henzi Wimberley, was the master of the Wimberley family. This family had changed their residence across different parts of the world, and were new to the town of Kentu