I believe the synopsis needs to be shortened. Giving out details on more than two or three stories is tiring to the reader. He needs to be engaged, not so much in the storyline, but in the mood.
Relevant Skills and Experience
I just had my book of short stories published, so I know the struggle to write a synopsis of your own. Furthermore I just recently completed a similar project for one of my clients - see my portfolio.
Proposed Milestones
$35 USD - A full synopsis of your book
Hello!
As mentioned above, I had my book of short stories published. And we went back and forth with my editor, discussing the synopsis, until we finally agreed on something that we both believed would work.
Being a fellow writer, I want to help you as much as I can. I can offer advice, as well as a few versions of the synopsis.
I also believe the synopsis must bring out some of the mood, the "spirit" of the book, not just reflect on a few storylines.
I'd love to discuss more details over in chat.
Looking forward to your response!
Kindest regards.