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Hello, I have produced an e-book , wedding guide, that I'm planning to sell via Click Bank. The EBook name is - "The Bible Of The Bride" and I need someone with native English, priority for a future bride copywriter. We need a short and focus landing page that will contain the eBook benefits along with some text, audio testimonials. You can check out the current copy – [login to view URL] And see for yourself that it’s not good enough, the copy is long and contains unnecessary information, In such landing page we need to emphasis the benefits and what the buyer will earn when purchasing the eBook package. The eBook package (comes with a wedding budget exe tool) priced at $39.45 USD. The seller will receive $24 for each sale. Payment is via PayPal. I've attached the landing page new design and I've to say that most important thing of the copy should be at the top. Regards, Barak