Academic Writing

Completed Posted Jun 28, 2015 Paid on delivery
Completed Paid on delivery

I am writing an essay to submit for a job application. The question is: “Why do you want to join Cathay Pacific?”

I have written the entire essay already but the essay feels too repetitive and the points are not direct enough. I would like:

 For the entire essay to be re-written and/or restructured

 Remove and repetitiveness to create a better reading flow

 To add the following points:

 My dad being an engineer – I have always enjoyed knowing how things worked etc.

 As I am an athlete, the traits of a successful athlete can be brought into the company – leadership, team work etc.

 Why would I be special if I was compared to another applicant? Sociable, work well with others, outgoing etc.

 I manage a lot of projects at work – coordinate and management of other colleagues and external vendors – good at multi-tasking, leadership, envisioning the future etc.

Research Writing

Project ID: #7957984

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