Rewrite/rephrase the "about us" section for our website

Public Clarification Board

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  gormsby49

  • 5 years ago

  As I was viewing your website there should be some pictures of the pocket punches along with some pictures of Miss Lola and Twiggy. Pictures of what a membership contains are nice too. I know you just started your business and building a website takes a little time there are some suggestions

  • 5 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 5 years ago

  Thank you all for your submissions. I have picked Jarrad's as the winner. I loved that Twiggy and Lola were the main focus.

  • 5 years ago
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     whetstoneedits

     • 5 years ago

     It was definitely a unique and out-of-the-box submission. Thanks.
     
     -Whetstone

     • 5 years ago
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  gerardmcshane

  • 5 years ago

  I would really like to know more about your business. What's fun? What's cozy. Your website does not seem to give enough info on what you are about and why the passion for hedgehogs. I sounds like a beautiful enterprise. But what actually gives you passion? I feel I would need to know that for my submission to be authentic.

  • 5 years ago
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  whetstoneedits

  • 5 years ago

  Hi.
  
  Please consider upgrading the contest with an #increaseprize to at least double the current prize. Freelancer deducts fees and taxes on our end, which drastically reduces the prize. (The freelancer contest fee is 10% or $5.00 USD, whichever is greater.)
  
  Thank you.
  
  -Whetstone

  • 5 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 5 years ago

     Hi Adive! Thank you for the suggestion, I did not know that free-lancer takes so much of a cut.

     • 5 years ago
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  gormsby49

  • 5 years ago

  how long have you been in business?

  • 5 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 5 years ago

     Gail, we just launched in January.

     • 5 years ago

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