Looking for a creative video/animation for a complaint system

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Prize: £100
Entries Received: 2
Winner: vw7394259vw

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Contest Brief

Hello,

I'm looking for a video/animation ad for a system in my country called Tawasul. ( http://oservices.bahrain.bh/wps/portal/ncs/!ut/p/c5/04_SB8K8xLLM9MSSzPy8xBz9CP0os3hfR08jT0sTI0sLIw9nA0cLF1fTUHNjQ3cjM_1wkA5kFSFmRkAVPkHmZuaWBgYGRhB5syBLMwsnQ0cDi0AvoAkmThaGgeYWBgbu5hB5AxzA0UDfzyM_N1W_IDs7yMJRUREAggFWnw!!/dl3/d3/L0lDUmlTUSEhL3dHa0FKRnNBL1lCUmZ3QSEhL2Vu/ )

This system is from the website (http://www.bahrain.bh)

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The script:

I would like the video to have the word "Tawasul" in it written or even with voice.
I would like the video to show an example for (inquiry, suggestion , and complaint) while the solution is to go to Tawasul system and submit the compplaint.

There are loads of services that you can use in the video creatively:

common issues:
- complain about viewing salary slip (solution is to make a complain on tawasul)
- complain about not being able to pay Electricity and Water bill (solution is Tawasul)
- interested to make a new idea for the website or any service available (user can do it on tawasul)
- inquiry about a service in any government entity listed on the Tawasul link (e.g. customer want to ask question to ministry of health/education/culture he can use tawasul system)
- suggestion to make any improvements in the services (e.g. character has idea and want it to happen he can make it on tawasul for any service)

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Feel free to look at the system and listed entities. both links above are full of ideas to help you make creative videos.

I would appreciate if you not put any copy righted content on the video

If I find an interesting video I would directly make it win
Goodluck!!

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UPDATES:
Example of a possible story script:-

a Person wakes up in the morning he didn't know what to eat for breakfast,so he had an idea to make a suggestion for Minstry of health to make for him/her a healthy breakfast recommendation mobile app. Another guy was upset because he had problems paying his Electricity and water bill on the bahrain.bh website so he made a complain on tawasul for the eGovernment authority , finally a guy was a businessman who want to come to bahrain he wanted to know the procedures e can make a tawasul inquiry for Ministry of Industry and commerce. In the end of the story, all users had their reference numbers on their mobile phones and emails. Finally, All the users have been contacted by the call center 80008001 or by the email. with the solution to their complaints suggestions and inquiries.

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The process of the system is: user goes on Bahrain.bh he clicks on Tawasul link, he submit his case to one of the government entities, user gets a reference number, user request status by website, live chat, phone 80008001. After few days user recieve the solution either by phone or email. if user was not satisfied he can reopen the case again.
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Here are some animations that would be interesting:
Animation ( I prefer something like this): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wSMu2a5ZmnY or
WhiteBoard: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gm079dGPCeI
Infographics : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5qJCE27Ukow

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pistoltoto
- 9 years ago
Thanks for response, I will send an animation later.
I will put some characters and text in video like in one of my videos:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kx9sCm5aLUs&list=UUmWXDupM88xTICW67IO4ovA

30-40 seconds of animation is ok ? (i dont think i have time for more..)
- 9 years ago
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1. Contest Holder
  - 9 years ago
  hi man. Are you there??
  - 9 years ago
2. Contest Holder
  - 9 years ago
  Hello pistol, I will award Khaled but if you have your sample ready I'm still interested to buy it
  - 9 years ago
HOSAM99
- 9 years ago
kindly watch my video and tell me what you think..i will customize on for you if you accept the style I am working with
- 9 years ago
1. Contest Holder
  - 9 years ago
  The samples are good but the voices are not clear
  - 9 years ago
HOSAM99
- 9 years ago
and another one https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_R172l7MxJc
- 9 years ago
HOSAM99
- 9 years ago
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZHEcYEZnO6I another sample
- 9 years ago
HOSAM99
- 9 years ago
السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته..اخوك حسام من مصر رجاء مشاهدة الفيديو الخاص بي و ابداء الرأي
- 9 years ago
1. Contest Holder
  - 9 years ago
  عليكم السلام و رحمة الله و بركاته الفيديو جميل لكن ليس له دخل بالموضوع كما ان الصوت ممكن ان يكون حاجز ايضا ، اتمنى لك التوفيق
  - 9 years ago
pistoltoto
- 9 years ago
Can you give more details about your script?
And more details about your system.
I understand very hard what you want in the Brief.
The link is broken...
Do you have some video references, of work expected?
I would like to make a video for you...
Take a look here where you can see A good Brief explanation: https://www.freelancer.com/contest/Create-a-How-To-video-for-Crowdfunding-website-95905.html

Please remake your brif with more informations and intuitive. Like step by step what is happening in animation.
Informations about product and so on.
- 9 years ago
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1. Contest Holder
  - 9 years ago
  You are free to either explain the system make a story or do whatever you like......Goodluck
  - 9 years ago
2. Contest Holder
  - 9 years ago
  Here are two type of animations that would be interesting for me
  Animation ( I prefer something like this): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wSMu2a5ZmnY or
  WhiteBoard: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gm079dGPCeI
  - 9 years ago
Contest Holder
- 9 years ago
(entry #1 ) for example:
Instead of "We are here for your service" we use " The National Suggestion & Complaints System"

Instead of inquiry about a service in any government link" we can use "You can make an inquiry about any government entity"

Instead of " We can focus until you get an answer" we can use " Our target is to give you the best solution"

On the governments entities list it would be nice to have the "eGovernment Authority" first because it is the one that made the system .. it is last one appears on the entities listed.

Removing the "SO" from both of last slides will also make it look more professional

last page instead of saying "CONTACT US we are ready to start working" you can use "CONTACT US through our eGovernment Authority portal www.bahrain.bh"
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Anyway if there was no other entries you are already the winner so don't disturb yourself if you don't want my friend
- 9 years ago
1. vw7394259vw
  - 9 years ago
  noooo, i am not here to just win, i am here to make my customer satisfied, iwill edit it and resend it again but please send me private messages from now one ,,, thanks
  - 9 years ago
2. Contest Holder
  - 9 years ago
  Thanks man.
  - 9 years ago
Contest Holder
- 9 years ago
For other visitors.... If you like to make a video it doesn't have to be like the first entry. You can also make it differently like a story..... for example, complaining about salary slip can be a person who is holding his phone or pc trying to print a salary slip.

Making an inquiry can be a person who has questions about the website .

Suggestion can be a person who has an idea.....

Feel free to be creative if you want
- 9 years ago
Contest Holder
- 9 years ago
Entry #1 is nice but there is room for improvement. specially the content written can be different.
- 9 years ago
vw7394259vw
- 9 years ago
hi, how r u? how long do you need this video ?
- 9 years ago
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1. vw7394259vw
  - 9 years ago
  ok i got it :)
  - 9 years ago
2. Contest Holder
  - 9 years ago
  :D
  - 9 years ago
Contest Holder
- 9 years ago
Not shorter than 20 seconds the maximum is up to you
- 9 years ago