Kids story about a life lesson

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  vksafa

  • 3 years ago

  Congratulations G Divya Preksha R on your achievement. Stay blessed.

  • 3 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 3 years ago

  Wow!! Thanks to all of you for your stories-- they really are good--- im sorry if u didnt get high stars but i enjoyed all of them and want to say Thank you!!

  • 3 years ago
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     IKhatib

     • 3 years ago

     Thank you sir

     • 3 years ago
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  vksafa

  • 3 years ago

  Dear Contest Holder, many thanks for giving this opportunity. Highly appreciate it. I'm withdrawing my entry as this extended contest is not concluding. Waiting further seems worthless as I have other similar opportunities to put my efforts. Thank you

  • 3 years ago
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  MehrZai

  • 3 years ago

  Dear Contest Holder,
  I'm eagerly waiting for your take on Entry # 61. I've tried to keep the story basic with the moral right along its side. Hope you and all the other readers have a good read!

  • 3 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 3 years ago

  I need A story for kids to enjoy-- all kids love adventures.. please read description from my details page!! Good Luck!!

  • 3 years ago
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     divyapreksha3

     • 3 years ago

     Sir I have written another one #60 . I have tried keeping my story and language as simple as possible for the kids to understand. This is a story full of adventures as you preferred and excitement. Thank you for this opportunity and I hope you'd take a look.

     • 3 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 3 years ago

     Thanks for doing a story ! Thank you again!

     • 3 years ago
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  farhanmomen

  • 3 years ago

  I am not mentioning anyone directly, but there is a question lurking into my my mind that A Contest holder can have so many beautiful stories by just one contest and with minimum of charges, may be the contest holder of this project is not as bad as I am thinking but it happened in one contest that I recently joined. One contester made complain about being cheated. What if he takes more than one story from the talented freelancers participating here. Could we able to know about this and even if we can know what could we do against this fraud act.

  • 3 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 3 years ago

     Don’t worry I’m only picking one winner. But has to be an original story:).

     • 3 years ago
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  vksafa

  • 3 years ago

  Kindly review my new entry #67. I had withdrawn my previous entry #30 as it was out of the contest theme and #66 due to some technical errors.

  • 3 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 3 years ago

  Please make the stories not real long-- We like them 3 paragraphs or less-- thanks for all of your help-- everyone of you!!!

  • 3 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 3 years ago

     Please don’t listen to this message at all. You can make stories longer then 3 paragraphs. I’m sorry ! Don’t know what I was thinking

     • 3 years ago
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     Brainarch

     • 3 years ago

     thanks for your continued support of the work being done to assist in making the world a better place

     • 3 years ago
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  MehrZai

  • 3 years ago

  Hello Contest Holder, just 10 hours to go. I've added in an entry. Kindly have a look and let me know!

  • 3 years ago
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  farhanmomen

  • 3 years ago

  In this contest The story written by Dr. Afia was brilliant, I forgot the entry number, most probably her story has been taken already, cause it is not found here now, she deserves the prize money for sure. The contest holder also appreciated her story. But how many stories would the contest holder need actually.

  • 3 years ago
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  A600DC

  • 3 years ago

  Hi, please take a look at my final effort - entry #58

  • 3 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 3 years ago

  Thank you all for entering your stories-- im trying to make the world a better place to live in-- thanks again for all the hard work and appreciate your stories.. if u dont win -- please never give up trying to make others happy:)))

  • 3 years ago
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     IKhatib

     • 3 years ago

     sure sir thank u for giving us chance to express ourselves

     • 3 years ago
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     Lshiva369

     • 3 years ago

     Ain't that the only way? :)

     • 3 years ago
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  farhanmomen

  • 3 years ago

  Can I submit my story now?

  • 3 years ago
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  inderriat

  • 3 years ago

  Please check my entry #47

  • 3 years ago
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  divyapreksha3

  • 3 years ago

  Respected sir, this is my first contest and I am giving my best. I hope you go through my stories, I have already uploaded 3 stories and I'm writing more. I hope my hard work would be appreciated. #29 , #36 , #39 . I have made it very colorful.

  • 3 years ago
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     divyapreksha3

     • 3 years ago

     Sir I have uploaded another interesting story #45 . I really hope that you will take a look. I am working on another story as well and I will upload it by tomorrow.

     • 3 years ago
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  IKhatib

  • 3 years ago

  Sir please check entry no #37

  • 3 years ago
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  IKhatib

  • 3 years ago

  Hi Contest holder I have written a short story of 3 paragraphs as you said hope you like it

  • 3 years ago
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  vksafa

  • 3 years ago

  Please check #30. Awaiting your feedback

  • 3 years ago
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  Zexica

  • 3 years ago

  Hello Arnab! Could you please give me a feedback about the story

  • 3 years ago
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     A600DC

     • 3 years ago

     Lastly, I thought that the children frightened of the wizard and he trying to admonish them and teaching them something in the process might not be a good approach. by default kids are innocent and curious, so invoking their sense of fear and showing disapproval from an authority figure can be counter-productive in teaching them life lessons, it is better to give a positive spin to things that they can learn from... the world is a hard enough place, no need to push them to face it and learn it before they need to do as they grow up.

     • 3 years ago
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     Zexica

     • 3 years ago

     Thank you for the wonderful advice, I did not think about it while writing, but you are right in everything. Thanks again.

     • 3 years ago
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  avirupa20

  • 3 years ago

  Please check #24 . Waiting for your feedback.

  • 3 years ago
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  avirupa20

  • 3 years ago

  Could you please give me a feedback about the story! I really want to write a good kid's story so if you have any suggestions I can use them and try to make it better.

  • 3 years ago
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     A600DC

     • 3 years ago

     If you don't mind inputs from a fellow writer, try to break up your writing in shorter paragraphs. Continuous writing without breaks can seem monotonous and dense, an impression you don't want to convey to your readers. Cheers!

     • 3 years ago
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     avirupa20

     • 3 years ago

     Thank you so much. Appreciate your feedback :)

     • 3 years ago
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  A600DC

  • 3 years ago

  Hi, #22 is an updated version of #20 with some edits. Request you to consider this one as my entry instead of the previous one. Thanks. Also please share your feedback. Cheers!

  • 3 years ago
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  A600DC

  • 3 years ago

  Hi, please check #20 . Feedback awaited.

  • 3 years ago
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  gagandeep8ingh

  • 3 years ago

  #14 is a Kids Story which teaches an important Life Lesson that 'You Don't Always Get What You Want'.

  • 3 years ago
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  itxnomanhere

  • 3 years ago

  Please Check #16

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  cooluser0101

  • 3 years ago

  #15 A beautiful short story about kids and Professor Ewizz by me teaching an important life lesson about friendship.....

  • 3 years ago
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  gagandeep8ingh

  • 3 years ago

  #14 is a Kids Story which teaches an important Life Lesson that 'You Don’t Always Get What You Want'.

  • 3 years ago
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  AmandaL53

  • 3 years ago

  Hi there. May I know what's the word count for this story? If it's for young children, I'd imagine it to be about 1000 words or even less due to their attention span. Looking forward to your reply!

  • 3 years ago
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  Rosedsouza03

  • 3 years ago

  Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback.I'll make the required changes . Yes I actually wrote the whole story as your description was very interesting and as I wrote I got ideas. Thank you so much for the opportunity and I'll surely make the required changes so it is 100% to your liking. Thank you once again!

  • 3 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 3 years ago

     Have you ever written kids stories before? or this first time

     • 3 years ago
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     Rosedsouza03

     • 3 years ago

     This is my first time

     • 3 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 3 years ago

  This story is about three kids. Gotta Wanna and Win-- they go on an Adventure out to learn about the world- when they find trouble or things not going to as planned they seek advice from the Wizard EWIZZ!!! WRITE A STORY FOR KIDS TO ENJOY@!

  • 3 years ago
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  Rosedsouza03

  • 3 years ago

  Greetings dear contest holder. Thank you so very much for the three stars!!! They made my day!!!Please could you tell me any changes that you would like to see so that the story meets 100% to your liking.Thank you once again!

  • 3 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 3 years ago

     you did good- I don't really like the gowawi but like the rangers. GWW Rangers would be better- also don't like the witches part--- Ewizz is the one they go to for advice on winning in life-- your story is good though. needs some cleaning up... Ewizz should live in a castle. did u write this whole story?

     • 3 years ago
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  deesharma111

  • 3 years ago

  Can you please make it #guaranteed ?

  • 3 years ago

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